nowadays it is important it is more convenient and easier for people to travel to other countries is this a positive or negative development?
People travel around the world to learn and see new things. Airplane and Car has improve our traveling convenient and easier to reach our destination therefore we can travel to various countries more conveniently. This essay will discuss why international travel has more benefits than demerits.
People who travel to the different countries can influence in the trade and people connection. International travelling has impacted in the increasing tourism among different countries. People is travelling around the world therefore resulting in increasing the people connections and tourism among the various countries. For example, in 2019, 23 million tourist visit in India.The other reason, volume of international trade are growing because of the international travelling and international trade. Countries trade between each other’s has been increasing because of the transportation between each other for trade are convenient and easier.
The above mentioned argument has negative aspects due to the international travelling. International travel has resulted in the rapid increases in the diseases among the people. The diseases which originated in one part of the country has travel to other parts of the world because of the international travelling among the people. For example, Corona viruses disease is spreading all over the world and it’s one of the reason is international travel. The frequently travelling of the people in international arena and has impacted on the loss of culture and tradition. Our culture and traditional impact has been impacted due to the influence from outside culture so,there is urgency to preserve our cultural heritage.
In conclusion the international travel between countries has resulted in increasing tourism and international trade among the various groups of the country . However, it has also resulted in the development for spreading diseases and threat to our culture and traditional.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69863013699 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10849749891 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.428082191781 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5875721064 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289364834242 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107344454801 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567199263883 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193505446689 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595184756577 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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