These days, there is a significant growth of young people choose to start their own business instead of working for other people. There could be several reasons why this is case and I believe that it could bring some drawbacks.
There are various reasons why many people choose self-employment. Firstly, a number of people follow their model such as Bill Gates or Steve Job who became very successful by the way of self-employed. Secondly, there are many venture investment funds in the market now that already have money for startups with real potential. In fact, one of most popular TV shows called: "Shark Tank" where a panel of investors and executives hear product pitches and compete to purchase stakes of entrepreneurs's businesses. Finally, these people also could manage their time, schedule or finances by themselves not by a manger or an accountant.
However, there are several drawbacks to this trend. There is no guarantee that a person already had enough experience to become self-employed. Therefore, they even can not earn enough money for a comfortable life and become a burden for society and their families. Additionally, with a too confident leader who has not enough experience, it also results in many poorly run businesses. For example, in recent years, a number of fast food restaurants were bankrupted after only 6 months of operation because of Covid epidemic and their weak financial ability.
In conclusion, working for oneself is definitely beneficial for young people because it enables them to work on their own term and follow their dreams. By contrast, it also brings negative impacts on economy when they do not great enough.
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14705882353 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83993967417 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632352941176 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2903664312 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205396433228 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686140051496 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730426431342 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126927980105 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733510997341 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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