Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
These days, the trend of “becoming your own boss” has witnessed some upward changes in our midst,
especially young adults who dream of owning a big business and earn a fortune. Independence and
financial autonomy are mainly the driving force behind this phenomenon. However, there are some
major downsides which should be contemplated before choosing self-employment.
Unlike another career , self-employment offers people with more control and flexibility in working
hours. People no longer have to endure pressure from bosses as well as colleagues when they work on
their own, meaning that the working hours will depend on their choice and above all, no more bearing in
a crowd during the way to a workplace. Instead, they can comfortably enjoy a cup of coffee while
checking their email or planning a to-do-list for a day. Moreover, self-employed people are also
experiencing higher job satisfaction compared to those who work in a company.
Working on your own as an ideal option notwithstanding, there are some considerable drawbacks to
being your own boss. Firstly, the income insecurity is the key factor that most people find it challenging
to cope with. As opposed to normal working conditions where people are guaranteed with a stable
salary each month, self-employed business depends on their ability to run the company smoothly and
also ensure that there are enough capital investment to maintain in a harsh market. Besides, additional
obstacles such as increased responsibility and pressure and potentially long working hours are
inevitable.
To conclude, self-employment seems like a perfect option for some people, not everyone. Therefore,
thorough consideration must be given before one opts for this attractive but risky career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... self-employment. Unlike another career , self-employment offers people with more...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'coping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: coping
...r that most people find it challenging to cope with. As opposed to normal working cond...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5347985348 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06634725388 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677655677656 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0309219154 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.230769231 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264303639603 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878425954885 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640542087058 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.071797361729 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069128575053 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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