Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?
These days, the idea of “self-employment” has become more common as an increasing number of individuals tend to work independently rather than engage in a corporation. In this essay, several reasons explaining this trend would be pointed out as well as the disadvantages accompanied by this option.
To begin with, the main reasons that lead to self-employment involve flexibility and autonomy. Firstly, contrary to the employees who stick to a fixed working schedule in an organization, self-employed individuals are capable of choosing working time and location. For instance, these people don’t necessarily have to come to the workplace at exactly 8 in the morning, or obey the uniform regulation. Secondly, numerous people feel more comfortable implementing some ideas by themselves. Not having to achieve working KPI, these persons could then come up with some creative decisions that might help their business.
Although the self-employment concept might be good as it seems, there are still some downsides remaining. Following a certain working scheme, employees could receive fixed salary in a period, plus extra pay for work beyond the target. This stable income, however, is not the case of freelancers, as they have to create several networkings in order to earn revenues. On top of that, working dependently can sometimes be stressful to some extent. The work-life balance can negatively be affected as they don’t have to follow a certain discipline like any other traditional pattern. This could result in long-term mental health and illness as these individuals have to carry almost everything.
In conclusion, while the concept of “self-employment” could be good for some reasons including autonomy and flexibility, the tradeoffs regarding unstable income and pressure could be huge to those who choose to work independently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 238, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to work'.
Suggestion: to work
...yed individuals are capable of choosing working time and location. For instance, these ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51929824561 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31357022178 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621052631579 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7793338609 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.357142857 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2857142857 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400800086333 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123694765737 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862870084974 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253565114883 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599466876204 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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