Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many people argue that zoos are helpful in preserving wild creatures. While there are some benefits from keeping these areas, I am of the opinion that animals should not be locked up in such places and zoos should be completely abolished.
On the one hand, the idea of zoos being allowed to exist is reasonable to some extent. Firstly, wild animals, especially those being put under threat of extinction, could be safe from hunters and other threats. Zoos are artificial areas in which species could live as if they were living in a real jungle, which is currently being damaged by fast-growing urbanization. Secondly, people could understand species' natural habitats and raise awareness in preserving certain animals.
Despite the above mentioned ideas, I believe zoos are unnecessary for a variety of reasons. Firstly, zoos can only hold small number amount of species and therefore the majority of animals couldn’t be protected from being hunted and natural habitats being damaged. Funds should be raised by government in order to organize preseving programs and activities to help stop and prevent the destruction of natural habitats. Secondly, some zoos are accused of mistreating the animals badly. They are abandoned without any medical care from zoo keepers and are left to die because of starvation and diseases.
In conclusion, while some zoos may have some positive affects involve environment for endangered animals and raise people’s awareness, I believe zoos should still be abolished as its’ affect in protecting animals are small and they do harm more than good.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25984251969 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67884384622 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606299212598 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7254418874 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400990765412 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146832784893 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775975689201 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262094693531 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427334530412 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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