Some think that people should not change their jobs while others think they should because it brings advantages for themselves, company and society. Discuss and give opinion
Some people are of the opinion that people should experience different jobs as it is beneficial to not only themselves but also to the company and society, while others believe having a stable and long-term job is better. In my opinion, while both options have their own advantages, I would prefer to have a job change for some reasons including self-enhancement.
On the one hand, committing to one job can ensure financial stability for employees. Working at the same place long enough guarantee employees stable income and different benefits such as social insurance, job promotion in accordance with their contributions. All of the rewards and policies applied mostly to full-time workers and give them motivation and the loyalty for the company. Applicants frequently job-hopping stand a lower chances of getting these. Switching jobs regularly leads to less impression in hiring department, as they consider this an unreliable person.
On the other hand, changing jobs once in a while gives people especially the youngster an opportunity to acquire a broader knowledge base and skills. Various high roles in a company requires many year experiences. As people suffer through various company, they get to learn in a new environment, significantly enhancing communication and problem-solving skills. Moreover, job hoppers can achieve carreer advancement without having to spend years for promotions from the lowest, depending on the adaptability to showcase their ability.
In conclusion, while working at one place can offer employees a stable income and career prospects, I believe that it is still better to have a job change occasionally as it gives people chances of booting personal skills from experiencing new challenges and benefit the company where they work and improve the labour workforce for the economy in general.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 261, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...in accordance with their contributions. All of the rewards and policies applied mostly to ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, while, in conclusion, in general, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4181184669 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03728444839 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606271777003 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.2168623973 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.583333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302337613691 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099744966054 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786035726809 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184697154919 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833121750915 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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