In the world we live in today, people are more interested in sports played by men. In my opinion, this is an adverse trend. This essay will discuss how this over emphasis on male sports decreases interest of women in games and impacts their image in the society.
Attention and encouragement play a vital role in a person’s growth. When the female players do not get the same kind of treatment like male players do, they lose their morale and enthusiasm, since they know that no matter how hard they try, they will not get the same attention that men do In a recent study in Canada it was found that only 30% of women are interested in sports leagues and the rest cannot find a valid reason to participate.
Also, the lack of interest in female sports creates a wrong impression about the capabilities of a woman. Since women are not treated the same way as men in sports, people misjudge them and think they might not have the same talent that men have. If women are not given the chance to prove themselves, there is no way they can showcase their capabilities. For instance, in 2015 when the Men’s World Cup Cricket was played people had high hopes on the Indian team but they lost it. Immediately after, Indian women’s team won the world cup for which they did not get the much-deserved appreciation.
To recapitulate, when men’s sports gain more attention than women’s sports, it has a negative impact on the society as it not only brings down the enthusiasm of the women but also portrays them as weak and incapable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, for instance, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68248175182 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61608578665 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547445255474 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.8178486429 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.636363636 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288671973916 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104732355588 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819673383488 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186637758909 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914211963317 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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