Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?
There has been a significant increase in the popularity of young people waiting until they get older to have babies. In this essay, I will outline the main reason for this tendency and its impacts on society and family lives.
On the one hand, the main reason leading to this trend is that youngsters want to spend as much time as possible on enjoying their young ages instead of having responsibility with their children. In fact, this choice allows young people to have not only more free time to broaden their horizons but also more opportunities to pursue better career prospects and raise their salaries. As a result, being pregnant late can help parents to guarantee good lives for their children due to their useful experiences gaining in the younger period as well as high incomes.
On the other hand, this tendency may bring some negative influences on society in general and family lives in particular. Firstly, having children late can create a considerable gap between two generations. Consequently, parents can find more difficulties in starting a conversation or discussing with their offspring. Moreover, babies being born with poor physical health are often associated with their parents’ late reproduction. This may be harmful to the quality of future workforce in terms of working efficiency.
In conclusion, there are many benefits explaining the reason why people prefer having children later in their life. However, this phenomenon may pose many threats to both society and family lives.
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also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, in general, in particular, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22448979592 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75246737215 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612244897959 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1825840171 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.666666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3333333333 7.06120827912 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275323705782 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964392830131 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783804507049 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169908534998 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066448860826 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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