The chart shows unemployment rate and the number of people leaving Ireland from 1988 to 2008.
The given chart illustrates the comparison between the percentage of people who are jobless and the number of migrators in Ireland over the 20-year period from 1988 to 2008.
Overall, there are significant drops in both the joblessness rate and the migration number between 1988 and 2008. Additionally, it is obvious that the figure for the number of people leaving their country decline rapidly in almost all the period shown.
As can be easily seen from the chart, starting at about 16%, after some fluctuations around 14% from 1988 to 1994, the percentage of unemployed people underwent a considerable fall of approximately 10%, then hit the bottom in 2000, at 4% which was just one-fourth as opposed to its counterpart in the beginning of the period. Subsequently, this figure decreased marginally to roughly 6% at the end of the examined period.
Regarding the number of people leaving Ireland, the figure for 1992 reduced nearly a half in comparison with that for 1988, at about 33000 people. During the following 10 years, this figure continued to experience a slight decrease of about 5000 people, before increasing sharply to roughly 50000 people in 2008.
- It is more important to spend public money on promoting healthy lifestyle to prevent illness than to spend it on of the treatment of those who are already ill.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- It is more important for children to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? 67
- Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
- Students today can easily access information online, so libraries are no longer necessary. Do you agree or disagree? 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75707344716 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.0591586753 43.030603864 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.571428571 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4285714286 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373378270305 0.215688989381 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160360265352 0.103423049105 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098281329096 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227434753702 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716593996499 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.