Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
get pregnant later in life while others think they need to giving birth as soon as possible. Personally, I think this has more advantages than disadvantages for women. This essay will provide suitable reasons and examples for this opinion.
First of all, there are lots of positive impacts on females when they have babies later in life. The first reason is that parents need to spend a lot of money buying facilities such as diapers, milk powders, and so on to raise a baby perfectly, which is might difficult for couples who do not have a good financial status. Therefore, they should work to save a huge amount of money before having kids later in life. Secondly, If young parents do not have enough knowledge on taking care of babies, they will feel stress, frustration. As a result, before getting pregnant, they should take time to learn and practices how to raise a child correctly. In addition, giving birth later is also an opportunity for young couples to share their loves with partners and take care of themselves.
On the other hand, females who are born kids too late still have drawbacks. The first disadvantage is that when they at an old age, they do not have enough strength and stamina to raise kids. Moreover, another negative impact on couples is that If they still do not have a child in a long time, which females might have a miscarriage and this can cause tear apart family relationships or even worst is divorce.
In conclusion, despite having drawbacks, I believe that the advantages still outweigh the disadvantages on get pregnant later in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Get
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79487179487 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57064575918 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56043956044 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9077021886 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.692307692 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6153846154 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300422868338 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114160524517 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837019217294 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201706297926 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789822519853 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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