Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do the advantages of this trend outweigh disadvantages?
It has become common for young couples to opt for late pregnancies. There are several reasons for this trend. Personally, I believe the benefits are more significant than its drawbacks.
On the one hand, there are justifications for the decisions to have a baby later of many families. As gender equality has been championed all around the world, women no longer stay at home but to go out to work. This means that they face a dilemma after their marriage of deciding between having a baby or developing their career. Some choose the latter because they feel a sense of freedom as well as empowerment when they work towards goals and success in their lives. Moreover, due to economic reasons, many households are not ready to have a child and decide to wait until they have the necessary resources for bringing up a child.
On the other hand, this trend brings more advantages than disadvantages. Firstly, a child born to older parents tends to enjoy better financial support. This helps them to stay longer in educational systems, which give them an academic edge and better prepare them for the future. Secondly, it has been proved that late motherhood protects women against late-life cognitive decline; therefore, they can enjoy better health when they get older. Last but not least, this trend highlights the fact that women should not be restricted to just the role of stay-at-home mothers and encourages them to pursue their careers if they wish.
In conclusion, the shift towards late pregnancies can be attributed to the options that women have in today’s world and economic reasons. Besides, the drawbacks are far outweighed by its benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98194945848 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63862121917 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620938628159 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.919711619 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228018277064 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836673409278 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813582198512 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131058128108 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569717147725 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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