Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music, film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no public or government restrictions on what they do.
It is argued that artists such as painters, writers and music composers should be totally free in their artistic expression and, therefore, that their works should not be the subject to governmetal control. Personally, I cannot agree with this statement.
It is true that, to a certain extent, artists should feel free to present what is on their mind through artworks. Under some undemocratic regimes, artists are often find themselves under the pressure to produce pieces of art that endorse certain religions, faiths or political parties. These products, as a result, are not real art since they are interfered by the interest of minority groups. Moreover, when producing under such circumstances, artists often cannot make use of their potential, which makes them fail to bring masterpieces to life.
However, there are reasonable arguments for restrictions on art production from the authority. Firstly, if left to their own devices, artists, including amateur and professional ones, could create works that have a harmful impact on the public’ perspectives and ideas. For example, pornographic images and violent videos would be given free rein to be on the market, which would wreak havocs on the mental development of the young. Another example would be songs or films conveying incitement to racial hatred or objectifying women, which could make the world become a worse, violent place to live. Governmental censorship and regulation are, therefore, necessary to protect the public from insidious materials and to maintain order in society.
In conclusion, I believe that the government should not interfere with the process of producing art. However, the end results of any artist should be cautiously reviewed for the sake of the public’s well-being.
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- Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student s performance Continual assessment such as course work and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 84
- Some people believe that the main benefit of international cooperation is the protection of the environment while others think that the main benefits are in the world of business Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- Society is based on rules and laws If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do it could not function To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement 78
- Nowadays in many countries more and more people are spending their time away from their families Why is this What are the effects on themselves and on their families 80
- Some people think that being born to a poor country is a bad luck while others believe that it only helps fuel one s aspiration to succeed Discuss both view and give your opinion 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38628158845 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85774221376 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631768953069 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6423203032 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.769230769 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276227600254 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817333123249 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736665502809 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166786605471 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576233905544 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.