Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
In modern culture, many adults are inclined to put off giving birth until they are in middle age. While there are a variety of reasons for this tendency, I also believe that its benefits will exceed its drawbacks to some degree.
There is no denying that people choose not to have children at a young age for several prominent reasons. One of them is that they must have faced various pressures when they were young in order to accumulate sufficient funds. In the early years of life, they are likely to find it challenging to get a stable career with a decent income, while fostering a child is a difficult task. In addition, it is true that delaying having children in the early years will give them more opportunities to enjoy their lives. For example, in terms of travel or further education, couples tend to have more choices unless they have to nurture a child.
It should be noted that this trend will have both merits and demerits. According to scientific evidence, not only do elderly people have difficulty giving birth, but their infants are more likely to suffer from fatal diseases such as rickets and autism. However, I believe that it has more advantages than disadvantages. If they promise to provide adequate financial support for their children, their children will be well-rounded as a result of opportunities to access high-quality education or nutritious diet plans. As a result, they will be responsible for improving the workforce’s capacity in the future.
In conclusion, I believe that people have reasons for delaying having babies until they reach middle age, but the benefits outweigh the threats.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 294, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'getting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: getting
... they are likely to find it challenging to get a stable career with a decent income, w...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96715328467 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6675137292 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583941605839 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7400012229 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.692307692 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262119942758 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924336354993 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063317739202 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14885750558 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647305248291 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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