Nowadays most people wear western clothing rather than their traditional clothes. What are the reasons for it? Is it a positive or a negative development?
There is no doubt that many things had changed in the last decades: some changes for betterment and some changes are for worse. One of the fields which were greatly affected by globalization is clothing pattern and fashion world. In the new era, most inhabitants prefer new clothes brands which produce in the Europe and America. In my view, this issue has merits and demerits simultaneously. In this essay, I would like to account for both sides with my perception.
Firstly, modern clothes brands such as Zara, New Yorker, Nike design their products for season and for circumstances. In my opinio...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...has merits and demerits simultaneously. In this essay, I would like to account for...
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...suitable for sport or leisure. Moreover, local designers do not have desire to pr...
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...e there are no demand from inhabitants. Also indigenous factories can not afford to ...
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...he national holiday. So we will not meet person who wear traditional clothes in t...
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...nceal bygone local clothes patterns. As a consequences, common style and fashion could disappe...
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...e to buy and dress approachable brands. However youth and adults should respect their t...
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...lance and save national clothes beauty. Moreover it would be better if they modernize tr...
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... be better if they modernize traditional clothes design.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, of course, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43975903614 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85444927777 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611445783133 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.7838276571 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.0 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8095238095 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261792135493 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723431975953 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427677424979 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131228473159 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608931683117 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.