Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed?
What is the reason for doing so?
Is it a positive or a negative development?
The issue of strict parenting has always been highly debatable in all the societies. It is claimed that modern children experience excessive tension from parents to achieve success in their lives. I believe there are various reasons for such parental behavior, however, I find this tendency to be negative.
I am sure that the primary reason why youngsters are under extreme pressure is their parents' life experience. It means that many adults desire prosperous future for their offspring and they are convinced that competency in diverse spheres is the key to success. Due to this, parents are severely concerned about their children's academic performance. As a result, they make youngsters study hard or do sport to develop discipline. Thus, children are often pressured by their own parents who force them to indulge in various activities.
I believe that such relationship between parents and children may negatively influence mental health of the latter. This is because young people are prone to stress, being involved in diverse activities that do not bring any pleasure to them. Many parents are over worried that their offspring will not succeed in the future, that is why children are usually deprived of rest and recreation. According to a social survey conducted by the Faculty of Psychology in HSE among 100 high school students, about 30% of teenagers suffer from various mental disorders due to lack of leisure activities. Thereby, enforcing children to achieve success could be detrimental for their psychological health.
Taking everything into account, even though extra control and enforcement are considered to be manifestation of parental care, I believe that such educational approach unfavorably affects mental health of minors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, thus, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41818181818 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78395402261 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621818181818 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3708817088 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.428571429 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78571428571 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267519963855 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937858776869 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500105175272 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150483422688 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805442251929 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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