Nowadays people prefer to shop in large supermarkets rather than nearby local shops. why do you think this happens? is this a positive or negative try and give your opinion and example from your own experience.
In this modern era, supermarkets are becoming increasingly popular, leaving the local stores for behind in competition. It is no exaggeration to say that supermarkets give more opportunities. I believe this trend has many positive views rather than local markets.
There are manifold points to shower up my views. First and foremost, the majority of the people are now performing supermarkets for the sample reason that everything. They can require shopping from under one roof like electronic, accessories, clothes and so on. However, supermarkets have a large air conditioner. They give a lot of offers on gadgets, clothes and accessories during any festival. They display to every product in a best way. If person buy any things, he marks symbolized as status in society. Unlike certain local shops say of promoting a particularly brands only, super take the feedback accordingly. Also some, supermarkets also give free home delivery.
On the other hand, small shop offer the customer a better standard of service. They can give a low discount on products. Moreover, poor people can complete their desire in local shops.
To conclude, every coin have two aspects. But I think that, supermarkets is better than local market. Because supermarkets give a discount on products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...tival. They display to every product in a best way. If person buy any things, he ...
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Line 3, column 620, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...y, super take the feedback accordingly. Also some, supermarkets also give free home ...
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Line 7, column 103, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...permarkets is better than local market. Because supermarkets give a discount on product...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30392156863 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98340598392 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686274509804 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6656656454 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.1111111111 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.3333333333 20.7667163134 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22813605377 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628768734424 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545976854992 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1383258631 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477034245173 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.85 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.28 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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