Nowadays people buy a lot of things even though they don’t really need them. Why is it happening, in your opinion? Is it a positive or negative trend for the individual and the society?
In this modern era, people spent huge amount of money on different products. However, they are wasting money in these things. With the help of advance technology. People are influenced by various advertisements. Which is helpful to make status in society. It is the cause of create garbage and wastage of money.
To begin with, the first factor is influencing the apart types of advertisement. People want to live aristocratic lifestyle and they are following these products, because they want to improve their living conditions in society. However, in a market, there are several types of items sale on low discount. they display all product on stands. Because of, individual influence by these products.
Moreover, the first positive point is People want to uplift their living standard in society. The availability of products are lucrative the standard of living status in community. What's more, in this high tech era youngster copy to celebrity. They want to adopt same their lifestyle standard. So, people purchase luxury items such as clothes, cars, and others products.
On the flip side, there are a lot of negative points. First and formost, pupils always want to buy new things. Consequently, there are purchasing unnecessary product. Most of time they replacing house items and frequently buy new things, more and more use of goods is leading to rise in the production of waste material. Thus, the problem of rubbish is on the diagnosis and it has become a worring concern for ecology.furthermore, wealthy people buy things which they may not need in daily routine.
To recapitulate, advertisement industry brings a large amount of money for companies. Although, it provide more job opportunities for the people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22580645161 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92258688701 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573476702509 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.679936878 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.3913043478 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1304347826 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.08695652174 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15272730739 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385497452836 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391188611024 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789834966186 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417503103156 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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