Some people believe thar, the Internet will replace traditional books in the future. Do you believe this would be a positive or a negative development.
Internet and books, necessity is the mother of invention in this modern era. In today's world due to the advancement of technology, new inventions are coming into existence. Internet is just like a wooden box. Which contains every type of information related to study. I think that is a good and innovative way of reading and there are many advantages of reading digital books on internet than reading paper book prints.
To start with, multifarious points depict positive impact of internet. First and formost, Internet service as the fattest and more convenient mode to access the mine of information. For instance, there are plethora types of website on the internet. People can gain information about their filed. However, books contains limit amount of data are not in the access vof everyone. Hence, internet is likely to replace traditional books. Moreover, student has to carry a huge burden of heavy texts of their school and college. However, the availability of internet allow them to reduce their such burden.
Thus, internet may put the books at the low ebb in coming years.
On the flip side, there are many disadvantage of access the internet. Firstly, we can not read ebooks on the internet for long period. Because, it create many health hazard such as eyesight problems, heart attack and so on. Also, we can not zoom and flip text page for long time on the internet. Hence, plethora of unemployed people may upsurge due to lack of opportunities. Thus, excessive use of internet may spoil the health of users.
In my opinion, both sides have their own significance, the Internet can provide transformed of the world. Secondly, we should not neglect the use of traditional books. However, books should be used for boosting the knowledge skills.
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| 2018-05-22 | Gavi Singh | 61 | view |
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun disadvantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many disadvantages'.
Suggestion: many disadvantages
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Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much health', 'a good deal of health'.
Suggestion: much health; a good deal of health
...net for long period. Because, it create many health hazard such as eyesight problems, heart...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, for instance, i think, such as, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02040816327 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65715713829 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578231292517 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.4902545855 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.1739130435 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7826086957 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.60869565217 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1605797057 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474558117195 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351818737698 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895138966931 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224454532385 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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