Nowadays people tend to have children at an older age. Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages.
Today, the tendency of individuals being parents prefers to be at a more advanced age. This issue, i believe, would bring some significant advantages which i will explain in this essay
First and foremost, one notable advantage of delayed parenthood is the pursuit of future career. Many individuals prioritize establishing their professional and educational goals before embracing the parental responsibilities. For instance, The New York Times revealed that most of upper-middle-class American women put off childbearing to settle their career for over 30’s. Furthermore, financial stability becomes the most significant factor which allows middle-adulthood couples to accumulate financial resources, providing a more stable and nurturing environment for children. Undoubtedly, the escalating costs ranging from prenatal to education underscore the major significance of financial preparedness, an article published by Cureus.
Conversely, this current behaviour arouses the potential for age-related health complications. Biologically, advanced maternal age links to a decline in fertility. This means that mother greatly pose higher consequences of miscarriage, pregnancy failure, thus, a child may risk suffering from chromosome abnormalities, even Down Syndrome. Another disadvantage involves a reduced energy level for parenting, aside from a social stigma too old to up-bring their offspring. Older parents, according to Reserach Gate, may face challenges in keeping up with the physical and energetic demands of parenting, potentially impacting on less available time of quality spent with their children.
To sum up, despite some substantial drawbacks, I would argue that to give a birth in a later age brings more major benefits to modern parents. Those include achieving prospect career and stabilising financial savings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.06896551724 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34243703332 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.72030651341 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.440900637 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.846153846 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139957656443 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042715782621 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344702456331 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807492604458 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485491261785 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.93 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.46 8.58950901804 133% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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