Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening.
In this day and age, the technology has brought the biggest change for humankind. I consider that technology such as cell phone tracking and security cameras are disadvantages in term of privacy concern. However, I believe that those technologies can relieve to reveal criminalities and beneficial to track children activities.
To begin with, the presence of mobile phone tracking technology has affected to the invention of privacy. Firstly, people become comfortless simply because those are tracked all the times. This can lead to the trust issues in social life, meaning that some individuals can be mutually suspicious. For instance, the telephone spy application which mainly is used by couples to monitor their activities. However, those are uncozy to be monitored. As a result, plenty couples decide to break their relationship.
On the other hand, mobile phone tracker can be possible to use by parents in order to control children activities. This is beneficial for tracking children which potentially playing in a forbidden location. Furthermore, using technology such as security cameras can reveal criminalities. This is because the human activities have been monitored by CCTV in recent days. For instance, In Indonesia had exposed a criminal case of cyanide in 2016, which the case was recorded at the crime scene. In this case, the technology has assisted to uncover the criminal action.
In conclusion, It is obvious that the technology has largest advantages in revealing criminal action and as GPS tracker for children. While the disadvantages of this technology are unpreferable in the human privacy
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- no 11
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the largest'.
Suggestion: has the largest
...sion, It is obvious that the technology has largest advantages in revealing criminal action...
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Line 4, column 134, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...action and as GPS tracker for children. While the disadvantages of this technology ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40157480315 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99554301364 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551181102362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.862930381 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.7058823529 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9411764706 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280899065211 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860256239843 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041208358323 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167648766764 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472083095384 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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