nowadays working from home is famous .do you think the advantage of this approach outweigh disadvantage.
These Days most of the official meetings and training are being held online rather than to come to office. I totally agree with the notion that working from home helps people to give better results. This essay pertain both advantages and drawbacks.
It is often accepted that people who had an option to work from home mostly gives better results. By being attending meetings at home masses may save more time despite of travel to the office and for the time being individual can focus on the upcoming discussion. Certainly, this would help them to enhance their productivity in addition with to land up with better outcomes. Moreover, by sitting at home, people feel more comfortableness until and unless there is no disturbance.
On the other hand, by sitting at home, people may feel lazy instead of focusing on their official work, consequently, they might loss there forthcoming projects or could be fired from their respective duties. However, people who are being lived in rural area may have certain issues like network connectivity, privacy etc, therefore they might lose with valuable information which may affect their assignments and might be perilous for them.
To summing up, I believe that people who are ardent about their roles and responsibilities can landed up with upstanding results while attending online meetings and training. In contrast, employee who are not focused might lose their jobs .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 212, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'pertains'.
Suggestion: pertains
...ple to give better results. This essay pertain both advantages and drawbacks. It is ...
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Line 4, column 239, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ho are not focused might lose their jobs .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, may, moreover, therefore, while, in addition, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14718614719 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63685675105 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632034632035 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0735939091 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.090909091 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0662374641095 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0329855611038 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428763755123 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0526656882597 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449648470626 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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