There is a debate whether country government should spend more money on building railway lines for rapid train or they should spend them on upgrading the current public transportation. I completely agree with the latter that a huge amount of money should be used to bettering the current public transportation.
On the one side, building rapid train's railway lines is great because it can make more rapid trains to operate. The growing number of rapid trains operating are expected to overcome the traffic congestion problem that exists, because it will encourage people to change from their private transportation to rapid train. However, because of the cost needed to build railway lines is not cheap, it will most likely to have impact on the fare of rapid trains. As a result, citizens will be reluctant to switch from their private transportation to rapid trains.
On the other side, upgrading the current public transportation is also great because it will make the existing public transportation to be more convenient. These new and comfortable public transportation will be able to attract citizens to switch from private to public transportation. Because the price needed to upgrade the existing facility is not as expensive as building new facility, the public transportation fare will not be largely affected, thus make it affordable for citizens to use. As a result, citizens will more likely to switch from their private transportation to rapid trains.
In conclusion, I completely agree that huge amount of money should be spent to upgrade existing public transportation because it require less money than building new railway lines which will have impact to the fare. The cheaper the fare, the more likely citizens to switch from private to public transportation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'trains'' or 'train's'?
Suggestion: trains'; train's
...ion. On the one side, building rapid trains railway lines is great because it can m...
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Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'requires'?
Suggestion: requires
...isting public transportation because it require less money than building new railway li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, thus, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25174825175 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94792364252 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.398601398601 0.561755894193 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6119249747 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.166666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258075354339 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11672969691 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767302249362 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189900160722 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573611927951 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.