The number of endangered species has increased significantly in the century, and we can find more mass extinctions in this period of time. State some reasons for this and provide possible solutions.
It is true that the problem of disappearing species has been extremely escalated in recent years. There are several reasons leading to this situation and measures to handle it.
The factor could be considered as the major contribution of this problem is illegal hunting wild animals. The increasing demand in the use of rare species’ organs in favor of food, jewelry and medical treatment stimulates a vast number of wildlife trading crime. As a sequence, the number of such animals would intensively fall down, and some of them are even pushed to the brink of extinction. According to the National Geographic, for example, over 50 percent of lost elephants in South Asian in recent two decades is associated with the purpose of ivory consumption in black market. This is compelling evidence for the detrimental effect that such criminal poses to the diversity of ecosystem.
To tackle this trouble, strengthening the strict punishment to crime those poaches wildlife species appears to be a potential solution that governments should take. A huge amount of payment in financial fine or long sentences in prison is likely to be a practical way to punish those who commit to crime in terms of illicit exploiting animals. For instance, Vietnamese authority impose an increase in sentences from one to three years in the jail to those harvesting red-ear tortoise’s shells. Over a period of 5 years, this country witnessed a significant development in the number of this tortoise individuals as a representing of the possibility of this method.
In conclusion, I believe killing animals without concerning about regulations causes a harmful threat to existence of some species and country councils should apply harsh punishment to prevent this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 206, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...harsh punishment to prevent this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22695035461 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94444990144 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620567375887 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2956336356 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.833333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254874886528 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837810782893 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684333549337 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13453942366 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389950361833 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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