One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing.
Do you think advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
Modern scientific advances have drastically altered human beings’ way of life. Medical breakthroughs in healthcare result in the fact that individuals’ life expectancy is rapidly growing. Although rise in a lifespan may pose a potential threat on people’s wellbeing in the long run, I strongly agree that being able to live longer enables humanity to be better off.
On the one hand, as life expectancy frontiers have been pushed, one ought to accept the fact that overpopulation is considered a major problem. This means that countries are likely to encounter the depletion of crucial resources and food scarcity due to rise in population. Moreover, not only can the authorities face the moral dilemma of shrinking the number of people by restricting the birth rate, but also executing the living people. For example, the leitmotivs of hunger and annihilation may be in modern anti-utopia books, which some people believe not far from the truth. In other words, uncontrolled birth along with unlimited life entail serious threats to the society of future.
On the other hand, the ability to possess an internal life provides boons to humans and the community at whole. Being granted an opportunity to exist beyond the traditionally given period, people will open abundance of opportunities for themselves. This is because an unrestricted dwelling aids to realise an individual’s full potential, since in today’s world people are confined to the earthly life span. For instance, one can imagine the scope of scientific advancements which may be discovered and invented to improve the lives of the society. Thus, the possibility to live longer assists humanity with a huge number of benefits.
To conclude, despite the fact that extended or even endless life may cause problems with overpopulation, I am convinced that advantages of such a phenomenon will surely benefit the community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ous threats to the society of future. On the other hand, the ability to posses...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41528239203 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12800533736 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624584717608 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.960195269 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.428571429 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199957631813 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641116091817 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329090816568 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111296088087 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330057786218 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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