One day the worlds’ oil and gas reserve will run out. The search for alternative energy sources like wind power, solar power, burning waste, and power are causing as much environmental manage as the oil and nuclear power sources they are intended to replace.
Use your own ideas, knowledge, and experience and support your arguments with examples and with relevant evidence.
Many scientists believe that oil and gas sources will be run out in the future. They believe that the use of alternative resources and especially renewable resources is the best solution and absolutely is a greenway. In the following paragraphs, I am going to discuss this issue and the advantages of these kinds of sources.
On the one hand, oil and gas one day will run out, and we have to find other sources as an energy source. On the other hand, these sources that mentioned in previous lines are not eco-friendly sources and have different disadvantages for our environment. For example, every year for mining of oil from the seabed, oil pollution distribute in all seas in all over the world.
However, many environments institute, especially in Europe and the USA, are trying to find a green solution for this issue. They argue that renewable energy sources such as wind, solar, tidal waves power, and some waste material are the best option in a current situation. For example, we can see many solar panels are fitted in the roof in many European countries. The best example in pioneer of solar and wind power in Germany.
There are a lot of benefits in using eco-friendly sources. Nowadays, all over the world face to climate change phenomenon, which the most reason for it, is using of oil, gas and nuclear power in different sections (houses, factories, and other industrial parts,…) more than usual. The most obvious teats for our environment are climate change, ozone layer depletion, greenhouse effects and melting of ice caps, while eco or green sources they have not these kinds of damages for our planet, and instead, bring clean air and environment for us.
To conclude, using of alternative sources namely wind and solar energy would be better as soon as possible replace in areas with these kinds of potentials, and the government should try to use them in their countries and build some infrastructures to motivate people that keep their environment safe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 260, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...s, factories, and other industrial parts,… more than usual. The most obvious teats...
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Line 9, column 88, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...y wind and solar energy would be better as soon as possible replace in areas with ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94626865672 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66885371072 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534328358209 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.1803798386 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.357142857 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327830466622 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10902439184 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084381877683 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163187166447 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624408374407 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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