One should only use enough money to fulfill their need and rest should be given to needy to what extent you agree or disagree
The money is very important everyone and money are play the very important role in our life. The given topic asserts that should money did not the needy person after the fulfill basic needs ? I disagree up to extend with your statement.
It can be seen that, nowadays 60% people below poverty in India. According to me, one should not only use enough money to fulfill their basic needs and rest should be not given to needy person.apart of all, according to me, many people pay the tax to government, and then government should provide the facilities to needy persons because it responsibility to the government. Furthermore, government should provide the jobs which belong to poverty. According to me, only one person are not fullfill the need of needy persons. Because the people want are unlimited, and any person are not ready money to rest given to need person.
As far as, trend is concerned according to me, when government are fullfill the needs of needy person then decreaseing the poverty in country.
Government should provide the facilities to needy persons like, government should provide the free education their children belong to poverty line. However, if every person are education in are country than country will be developed. And every person that belong to poverty line to fullfill the own basic needs.
Overall, it is evident that clid effort should be there implement poverty line.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...is very important everyone and money are play the very important role in our life...
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...ld money did not the needy person after the fulfill basic needs ? I disagree up to extend w...
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Line 2, column 66, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...days 60% people below poverty in India. According to me, one should not only use enough money t...
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Line 2, column 194, Rule ID: APART_A_PART[2]
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...est should be not given to needy person.apart of all, according to me, many people pay t...
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ovide the jobs which belong to poverty. According to me, only one person are not fullfill the n...
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... given to need person. As far as, trend is concerned according to me, when gover...
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...uld be there implement poverty line.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0170212766 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52281673539 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472340425532 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5486835217 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6923076923 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354985906589 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124239499889 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112027229683 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178413715587 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110607127363 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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