In this cutting-edge era, civilizations have obtained education on the Internet. Online education became super popular among all age groups. A group of people thinks that e-learning has numerous benefits and it will replace old teaching patterns, others claim that the traditional way of learning is not replaceable with a new one. This essay shall discuss both the aforementioned views. I believe the traditional way of learning is super beneficial for everyone.
On the one hand, due to the tremendous invention of the internet, numerous people using these crucial sources in countless ways. Young people prefer to acquire knowledge online while sitting at home during pandemic situations. Online learning provides flexibility and a chance to study while working. Moreover, online study is not an effective way of learning in terms of practical skills.
On the other hand, novices at college or university can obtain an education in better ways as the traditional way of learning provides their great experience with practical skills. Educators can appropriately observe their pupils and enhance their ability of learning. Furthermore, students can acquire enormously face-to-face interaction with their tutors. Besides, group discussion and working on the project with other pupils also increase knowledge and skills with different ideas.
To close the discussion, an online study has plenty of benefits for learners, however, traditionally obtaining an education has marvelous advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70535714286 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96620796108 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611607142857 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3412873628 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2857142857 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274550290981 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879971248164 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486417815131 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15878824744 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725759190076 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.54 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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