Online shopping is increasing dramatically. How could this trend affect our environment and the kind of jobs required?
In the developed world, the internet has become an important part of our life. The internet has changed the way we purchase products and goods to satisfy our demands. Thus, more and more people are choosing to shop online. This trend can bring about many impacts on our environment and job market.
About the environment, shopping online have some advantages. First of all, shopping online help reduce environmental pollution. As we all know, the less people travel, the less polluted the environment is. If people buy all things on the Internet, they need not travel. This will lessen traffic congestion. As a result of not travelling, fewer people take part in the transportation system, there are fewer cars or motorbikes being used. Therefore, there are certainly fewer jams and traffic accidents. Moreover, less using transport means that people preserve natural resources, such as fuel or gas.
Another influence of shopping online is to change the job market all around the world. Because of shopping online, people do not purchase in stores and shopping centers so shopkeepers will no longer be needed. Instead of, online shopping could provide more job opportunities in the society such as web designer, online bank account system, shippers and so on.
To sum up, with the developing of shopping online, change is inevitable. This trend will make our life easier and bring more benefits in the future if we have appropriate adaptations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to shop'.
Suggestion: to shop
...Thus, more and more people are choosing shopping online. This trend can bring about many...
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Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...onmental pollution. As we all know, the less people travel, the less polluted the en...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, such as, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21367521368 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70521934468 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602564102564 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2871041442 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.25 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.625 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233734655913 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738424370003 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640171435892 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143131324919 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534038121494 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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