Overpopulation
Since the early 20th century, the population began to grow tremendously in the urban area, resulting in overpopulation. This increases pollution and intensive competition in the city. However, these issues could be addressed if both the government and individuals join hands.
By push and pull factors, the urban population has been increasing rapidly which leads to several problems. Firstly, it could lead to serious pollution. Due to urban sprawl, there are numerous private vehicles on the road causing traffic jams, along with the growth of more factories and industries for the demands of the citizens. They are the culprits behind air pollution, causing great damage to the environment and humans’ health. Moreover, the more people migrate to large cities, the more competition increases. A high number of workers exists but a limited number of vacancies and companies are available, this may instigate a higher unemployment rate, provoking poverty and social crime. Besides, with fewer resources, less space but a denser population, the living costs will rise. When wealthy families could afford quality education and food whereas poor families could only use the remnant. Mental problems may leave consequences on human life because of stress or low living standard.
There are ways to address this issue throughout. First, the government should carry out projects that densify the city such as walking streets or high-rise apartment buildings so as to make people less dependent on cars or promote recycling. Second, legal authorities should consider policies for migrants. For example, they could lower the tax rate for those who have lower living conditions and so on. Companies could also contribute by creating a friendlier working environment. People should think thoroughly about both positive and negative points before moving to a denser city instead of staying where they are to prevent unwanted outcomes.
To conclude, overpopulation has brought about several problems such as pollution and aggressive competition. Nevertheless, with careful plans, legal authorities and residents could tackle these problems together.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...treets or high-rise apartment buildings so as to make people less dependent on cars or p...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, whereas, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61349693252 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80686747543 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653374233129 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3290454765 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0350319787146 0.244688304435 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0115383964806 0.084324248473 14% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502947042293 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0366883618404 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063546106754 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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