overpopulation in major urban center around the world is major problem, What are the causes of this? How can problem be solved.
Increasing in the number of population have been highlighted as an emerging issue, capturing significant public attention due to negative implications on people’s standard of life. However, pointing out the causes could be the key to finding the solutions.
there are many reasons behind the overpopulation issue. Firstly, the inadequate sex education is the reason explaining for the booming in population worldwide. Specifically, the frequency of having sex between couples are increasing stunningly in recent years due to the opened minded trend occuring in all over the world in recent decades, and the majority of them haven’t had used any protection method to prevent pregnancy which lead to them being pregnancy unexpectedly, the result is it contributed to the overpopulation problem. Secondly, the traditional cultures in nations that required having at least a son for inheriting the family carriers is also a reason lead to the uncontrollable population. In reality, families won’t stop giving birth until they having the son, hence, individual household usually had at least 1-2 daughter before catching their dream of having boys,raising the number of population
Nonetheless, the issues can be scoped with many solutions. Firstly, utilizing the advantages of condom in sex can prevent pregnancy and protect people’s health. Moreover, schools and clinics in the cities could educate people about the methods that can prevent them from having pregnant, not only educating them but they should also providing condoms for free which could protect many couple from having pregnant unexpectedly. Secondly, the government intervention could be the solution for minimizing the number of member each household, for example, the government can set rules that penalty restricted any family that have more than 2 kids, by doing so, the population could be controlled easily.
In conclusion, having sex without using condom and the traditional cultures exist in nations have had impact on the population. However, thanks to the intervention of the government and the help from the clinics, the problem of population can be controlled nicely.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...be the key to finding the solutions. there are many reasons behind the overpopulat...
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Line 3, column 895, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , raising
...fore catching their dream of having boys,raising the number of population Nonetheless...
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Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
...nly educating them but they should also providing condoms for free which could protect ma...
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Line 5, column 386, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun couple seems to be countable; consider using: 'many couples'.
Suggestion: many couples
...ng condoms for free which could protect many couple from having pregnant unexpectedly. Seco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, at least, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58181818182 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04701452584 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557575757576 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.5992644439 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.5 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119428747876 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470641014828 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494567269453 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738302455565 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194688739987 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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