Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.
Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems?
As the number of people is increasing in the city area, as a result, it creates myriad issues. there are many difficulties of crowdedness in non-rural areas and steps are needed by the governments and societies to tackle this problem.
To commence with, a major problem of overpopulation of the urban area is that it affects the environment very badly. For instance, the emissions of vehicles and industries will create air pollution and the industrial zones will stand a problem of water pollution. Also, they both will produce noise pollution. Secondly, as people are augmenting, people did not find work or job easily. Therefore, the ratio of unemployment would becoming high. Consequently, some of the people will homelessness and become poor.
However, to tackle this paradigm, there two viable solutions the government and individuals can implement. First of all, the government should impose green taxes on drivers and the owner of industries and patronizes people to use public transportation or bicycle because it will improve the local environment. Moreover, governments should strive to pay unemployment benefits to help jobless people. because of these benefits, the poverty rate and homelessness will become reduced.
In recapitulation, it is clear that the problems cause by overpopulation in urban areas are very serious. Yet if governments and individuals share a collective responsibility, then it may well become to offer some solutions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... as a result, it creates myriad issues. there are many difficulties of crowdedness in...
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'become'
Suggestion: become
...refore, the ratio of unemployment would becoming high. Consequently, some of the people ...
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Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ment would becoming high. Consequently, some of the people will homelessness and become poo...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...oyment benefits to help jobless people. because of these benefits, the poverty rate and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46255506608 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18623127038 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607929515419 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3721775794 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5714285714 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2142857143 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231043887594 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764436907218 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869276018574 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146033988 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485299009637 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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