Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion? Support it with personal examples.
The importance of heading parents responsible for their children, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial.The substantial influence of parents responsibility, has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this rent on their children life in recent. It can be said that child reflect their parents lifestyle.This essay will elaborate how children learn things from parents and how external environment effect them and than will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why parents are responsible , but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that children observation.They learn same things as there parents do in home.For instance,according to startling new research, if their parents use abusing language than obviously they will observe and learn it.Thus,children observation must kept in mind.
Nevertheless,there remain some drawbacks which certainly overwhelm potential influence of children act, but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that their external environment.For example, they behavior can be influenced by their school peers.As they spent few hours with them.Therefore, they can learn negative things from them.
From what has been discussed, it can be concluded that importance of children behavior is prominent .Although, only parents are not responsible,external environment should be considered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88725490196 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.55718475134 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632352941176 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.9344911547 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 240.2 106.682146367 225% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.8 20.7667163134 196% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247670567206 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146077046292 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336731610379 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158333344457 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380795320005 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.7 13.0946893788 204% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.77 12.4159519038 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.