Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion? Support it with personal examples.
There is no dubious that parents should de jure and totally answer to the society in relation to deeds of their offspring. There are some views about this matter, and as far as I am concerning, I concur in taking responsibility by parents. This essay will discuss this notion.
In today’s world, by burgeoning population from one side, and being regulated the communities from other side, the number of right has to be respected by people is increasing. Children as cannot exactly and lonely make out and discriminate activities, from the perspective of legality and illegality, like adult, then a law might be intervene by them. On the other hand, children cannot atone monetary damages as well as abide and put up with long duration of jail. therefore, this question arises,” who is main responsible for damages and has to be incarcerated?”.
Children are brought up by parents, foster parents or guardians who aid children not only spiritually, but also via patronizing. From the point of learning moral precept, they have the most efficacious on children in formative years than their peers. Then, it is deemed that the direct responsible for the acts of children are nothing but their parents. It is on the shoulder of them to make amend damages and go to jail instead of their offspring. For instance, when I was younger, during playing football, I broke our neighbor’s window, and as I did not have money to change the broken window, then my father paid it.
To recapitulate briefly the above mentioned points into account, from my standpoint, as children have less awareness and cognizance towards laws, also parents are main responsible for raising children, thus, parents should be considered legally for their offspring’s deeds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
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Message: Put a space after the comma
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...of jail. therefore, this question arises,' who is main responsible for damages an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, so, then, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14532871972 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05502433588 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60553633218 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5927712299 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.384615385 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304896190074 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984934741047 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753251340517 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182943922537 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731876126507 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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