Internet has revolutionized how information is accessible to the masses, making it more convent for everyone. Many are of the opinion that it could potentially replace the traditional museum, others think that museums are irreplaceable. I agree with the second statement, the below essay will discuss why museums are important with relevant examples.
Firstly, although, internet is far more convent than museums, the information online cannot be trust worthy. For example,when a study was conducted by Cambridge university London. They accounted for the legitimacy of information available about the history of Mysore online, they verified famous historical websites. The result showed that 85% of the info was inaccurate and not accounted for. This begs the question, "How reliable is the internet?". Furthermore, information within a museum is backed by solid evidence. The practical objects contained withing the museums makes the information more concert.
Secondly, the experience museums have to offer is far more interactive than what we find online. For instance, studies have shown that when knowledge is backed by practical experience, the likely hood of retaining the information increases drastically. moreover, museums provide a combined practical and theoretical packaged information, thereby schools and universities are more likely to take their students on a filed trip to near by museums. making museum an important part of the contemporary society, which should be valued and respected.
To summaries, even-though, internet has vast amount of information to be offer on the tips of our fingers, the authenticity of this info is to be questioned. On the other hand, museums offer a combined package of both practical and theoretical knowledge, furthermore, they have played a vital role in conditioning the youth about the historical values. Thereby, in my opinion museums have a huge impact in the modern world than ever before.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62416107383 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1213104881 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58389261745 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5621363144 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5882352941 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5294117647 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249578960609 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079666104096 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281938976326 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154891633142 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470143360548 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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