In the past, the main role of teachers was providing information. Today with various sources of information available to students, teachers have no role in modern education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the recent past, we have witnessed a tremendous increase in the number of online courses being offered to students in various subjects. This has surely decreased the dependence on traditional classroom education for many. However, in my opinion the role of teachers in learning cannot be replaced by any other mode of education.
It can be agreedthat online courses offer number of benefits. First and foremost, students can learn anytime and from anywhere in the world. Course can be selected on the basis of one’s schedule. For Instance, students can study while sitting at the comfort of their homes or while traveling. Secondly, students can also choose the pace of the course they are studying. Every student has a different ability of learning and, can taketime till they have fully understood the lesson.
On the other hand, it can be argued that conventional classroom teaching is best for the holistic development of a child. Classroom teaching encourages debates and discussion which enhances the learning ability of children and it encourages health competition as well. These 2 attributes work like assets while securing employment positions in future. Further, teachers respond to student’s queries in real time which is absent in online courses. Various subjects such as chemistry and biology need the controlled environment of laboratories for learning; experiments conducted by students needs to be monitored by teachers for safety and better understanding.
To sum up, though the popularity of online courses is increasing due to ease of study and the availability of a plethora subjects offered, still it cannot replace traditional classroom studying with the help of teachers. Teachers form an integral part of learning and development of children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 342, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45878136201 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95317882003 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.0078118508 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1875 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0898323191248 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0295414367767 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413074429984 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665496208176 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464937881101 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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