In the past, when student did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country.
Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study in abroad.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development.
in today era it is necessary for each and every person to realize the value of Education but now a days students have a lot of opportunities to go abroad for higher education. this essay will be discuss advantages and disadvantages in the following paragraph.
To embark with, one advantage of pursuing higher education in Abroad student get to interact with new people and learn new culture and language. for example ,after completed the matriculation student want to go abroad for higher education. apart from that, foreign country provides a good y further more they will not return to their country because they think in their own country have not good job and opportunities. but this is not true own Nation provides a good job opportunities such as IPS UPSC and many more jobs .for exampl,many Indian students go to foreign countries such as a United States and America to pursuing their higher education they will not return on their country. in this way, the biggest effect to the growth of the nation and unemployment.
To conclude individual should try to research good job on your own country.apart from that,government has provide the good job opportunities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, apart from, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97959183673 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94652464725 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 506.74238477 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3759210455 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236592447511 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988292171317 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708343822935 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133964941892 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924196724673 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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