In the past when students did a university degree, they tend to study in their own country.
Nowadays, they have more opportunities to study aboard.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
You should use your own Ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with example and relevant evidence.
In today’s world, tertiary education is indespensible for majority of people. Many young pupils tend to study graduation in the comfort of their home town but recently, they have ample of chances to study in foreign countries such as the UK and USA. From my perspective, it is definitely for advantageous to study at international universities rather than their own countries educational sectors.
Many countries prefer an international degree for high paid jobs. Therefore, student also prefer to study abroad. The most beneficial part is, it provides adventure by travelling to a new country where can experience new challenges and open up the horizon to meet new people as well as get to know new culture. Moreover, new place opens new doors for students to show their creativity and cultivate their apptitude. To illustrate this more, one my friend quiet introvard and like to stay quite most of the time, also she was lack of self-confidence when she went to the UK for higher education she turned to be more active, confident and happy.
Furthermore, individuals who go to international university, they have to face new challenges, such as home chores, grocery shopping, pay university and appartment bills, earn money ( if they independent) and so on. It make them less dependent and self-confidence as well as personal growth.
However, there are drawbacks to this development. Local educational departments go through bas crises due to the lack of students which is why country have to face economical crises too because after graduation majority of people tend to work in the same countries where they got their education from. In regards of students, they have to go through stress and pressure in order to complete assignments on deadline and look after their home and financial issues.
In conclusion, I believe they, although there are drawbacks of studying in foreign countries, but I tend to believe it provides enorumous amount of benefits to individuals in aspects of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16307692308 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03711791129 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578461538462 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5832064637 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.857142857 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212799936622 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712362275378 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576838180445 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1183903768 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469165250068 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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