People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youths are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents can do there members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.
In recent years, there has been a growing concern that young population overuse some harmful drugs to release any stresses. This essay will investigate the causes and some effects surrounding this issue and present some possible solutions.
To begin with the reasons for drug abuse in youth, the most conspicuous one is perhaps that children in modern society are easy to expose illegal drugs due to light regulation. To illustrate, people can easy to buy marijuana everywhere even on the internet market in the USA. Another reason for drug abuse is that adolescent use to change their mood significantly and the period of sensitiveness triggers them to argue with complex rules.
Turning to the effects of drug abuse in early age, there are several side effects. one of the most critical effects is that they can lose their life. In other words, some people administer the illegal drugs by intravenous route and it is a dangerous way as toxicity substances included in these drugs. As well as this, young children can be addicted to drugs as they have immature judgement.
To sum, some factors and effects could be identified surrounding issues of drug abuse. In an attempt to tackle these problems, with right action such as education, good parenting or consultation to a doctor, they can be resolved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: used
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, as to, such as, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0504587156 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65852896946 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614678899083 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7172760481 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.090909091 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157711678912 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055945078317 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336358207912 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876697428492 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280575630145 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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