COMPUTER HAS BECOME MUSHROOMING TREND IN ALL OVER OVER THE WORLD. A SEGMENT OF SOCIETY ADVOCATES THAT USING DESKTOP IS BETTER WHILE OTHERS CONDEMN IT. IN MANY CASES IT IS ESSENTIAL THESE DAYS. THIS ESSAY SHALL SCRUTINIZE THE MERITS AND DEMERITS WITH OPTIMUM CONCLUSION.
TO COMMENCE WITH, NOWADAYS PEOPLE ARE USED OF COMPUTER-INTELLIGENCE. MOST OF THE TIME HUMAN ARE USING IT FOR WORKING AND FOR ORGANIZATIONS, ALTHOUGH, THE MAIN CONCERN TO SPENDING ALTOGETHER IN TECHNOLOGIES IS PURPOSE TO ACHIEVE THEIR FUNCTIONAL GOAL AND COMPLETE THEIR ACHIEVEMENT TASKS. IN OTHER HAND STUDENTS ARE ACCEPTING INFORMATION TECHNOLOGIES FOR ACADEMIC WISDOM AND PREPARING THEIR ASSIGNMENTS AND REPORTS FOR GETTING HIGHER SCORE. AS LONG AS, ENTERTAINMENT, MOST OF THE PEOPLE, ENJOY TO WATCH MOVIES, ONLINE SURFING AND PLAYING GAMES, THESE ARE SOME MAJOR FACTS THOSE MOLDING IT MORE FAMOUS IN ALL AGE GROUP OF PEOPLE.
HOWEVER, USAGE OF COMPUTER FOR A LONG TIME HAVE NUMEROUS SIDE EFFECTS ON HEALTH, FOR INSTANCE, THERE HAVE BEEN SOME STUDIES THOSE ARE EXPLORING THE DANGER OF COMPUTER DISPLAY ON EYESIGHTS, AND IT CAUSE INVOLVES DIZZINESS, NAUSEA, BACKPAIN ETC. SECONDLY, IT IS TIME-CONSUMING PROCESS, NOWADAYS MOST OF YOUNGSTER BECOMING HABITUAL OF COMPUTER. Nevertheless, COMPUTER TECHNOLOGY CHANGES THE WAY OF WORK GLOBALLY, AND IT IS EASY AND CONVENIENT TO USE. HENCE, THAT ARE PART OF ULTIMATE REASON OF PEOPLE SPENDING GOOD TIME ON PERSONAL COMPUTER.
TO CONCLUDE, COMPUTER IS A BLESSING FOR MODERN WORLD, EVEN THOUGH, IT DEVELOPS THE PROCESS OF WORKING AND PRESENT TO EACH PERSON GLOBALLY, MOREOVER THE LARGE CONSUMPTION OF ANYTHING IS BAD, SO BE AWARE HEALTH IS ALSO ESSENTIAL.
- The graphs below show unemployment rates and average earnings according to level of education. 61
- In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- People increasingly spend their leusure time using computers, for example, surfing the Internet or playing computer games. This has brought benefits but has also created new problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement? 78
- Some people think that the government wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view? 56
- Some people think that hard working and determination are the key factors for being successful in the life, other people feel that other factors are important. Discuss both sides, what is your opinion? 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37642585551 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98298121499 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642585551331 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3492179596 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.769230769 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217629951263 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682247669423 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432210801902 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111427124839 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048316927039 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.99 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.