People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?
Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
More and more people are moving towards big cities. Although this migration is to have a better life but they experience numerous obstacles in day-to-day life. The main problems of living in larger cities include high expectancy and frustration and greater exposure to environmental pollution. I think state or local authority can offer some long term solutions to move people to rural areas.
The fast spaced life of big cities attracts people from all over the countryside but also put them under intense competition in job market. Due to higher life-style expectancy, people are continuously exposing themselves to unnecessary stress which can ultimately leads to mental problems like depression. For instance, researchers have established connection between large city dwellers and mental health problem. Another problem which is worth to mention is environmental pollution in urban areas. The level of air pollution which results from emission of greenhouse gases by automobiles has profound effects on a person’s physical well-being. Moreover, mega cities like New York or San Francisco have numerous industrial and commercial establishments which further contribute to air pollution.
However, there are many possible ways by which government can encourage people to go back to small towns. Regional office of big corporation can be built or better commute network should be established between urban and regional towns. This way they can have their secured and high paid jobs close to their house or can travel from countryside to city everyday. Moreover, they can live close to the nature, enjoy the mesmerizing beauty with family which are very relaxing and keep people stress free. In addition there is less chance of getting sick from air pollution as rural areas are free of industrial pollutants as well as greenhouse gases.
In conclusion, city dwellers can face multiple problems which can be solved by the involvement of government in the form of building regional branch office and better commuter infrastructures. Thus people will move to countryside to enjoy a good life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 353, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... or can travel from countryside to city everyday. Moreover, they can live close to the n...
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Line 6, column 505, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...elaxing and keep people stress free. In addition there is less chance of getting sick fr...
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Line 8, column 253, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve to countryside to enjoy a good life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4237804878 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88756533027 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582317073171 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3786243207 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.647058824 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2941176471 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252879758052 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821510248158 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385833029794 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161509988231 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183608632212 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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