People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
It is a fact that gathering plenty of people in the same place, especially in large cities, is one of the main culprits causing environmental and social issues. Therefore, some set of thinkers supposed governments to encourage people to move to smaller vicinities. However, from my perspective, this way seems to be not really effective when it comes to real life.
A city is always an ideal place for everyone to live and work. Nevertheless, life in cities has its own potential drawbacks. The critical problems that citizens facing every day would be various types of pollution. High population density means the rate of emissions and waste are also at the top level. This phenomenon can be seen conspicuously in multiple large cities in the world where pollution is eternally a controversial issue for governments. Another difficulty involves the issue of unemployment. The cost of living in a city is usually higher than in rural areas as accommodating is much more expensive. People without sufficient skills and knowledge tend to have less chance to find a job to maintain their life in urban areas. As a result, homelessness and poverty that are the root of criminal activities happen as a matter of course.
Subsequently, a measure is given by governments to tackle this difficult situation is to stimulate inhabitants to relocate to other smaller areas. But I personally reckon that it may work ineffectively. The first reason to reinforce my belief is that the rate of air pollution is not guaranteed to lessen as their offices are still located in the city center. That means people will commute to their workplace with a much longer distance that can increase the number of exhaust fumes. The next reason supporting my opinion is finding an equivalent job in the countryside seems more challenging than in urban areas. It is undeniable that metropolises offer greater employment possibilities and a higher standard of living. Moreover, less developed towns usually provide low-paid jobs and much lower opportunity of looking for appropriate jobs.
In conclusion, although people living in big cities have to encounter a multitude of problems on a daily basis, encouraging them to migrate to rural districts is not a viable solution at least in terms of striving to alleviate pollution and the unemployment rate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, still, therefore, at least, in conclusion, of course, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1946.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10761154856 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01952733821 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590551181102 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3804646376 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.05 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25852074442 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590056808771 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571660394055 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148575443151 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358368826073 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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