Many countries import food from different parts of the world. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
As a globalization era, there has been an increasing tendency of the trading commodity across the globe. From my perspective, it seems that the demerits of importing food may overshadow its merits.
It is clear that some outstanding advantages are existing when countries exchange foods. First and foremost, several fruits and vegetables can only be grown in specific regions. By importing them, people all over the world can have a chance to relish a wider variety of food without travel to their original countries. For instance, America’s climate is not appropriate for mango’s development so that they have to import this fruit from India where many kinds of mango are available. The similarity could be occurred on the special spices and vegetables between tropical climate and temporary weather. Additionally, the more food is imported, the more farming land is no longer needed. It means more land is available for us to build houses and other facilities such as hospitals instead.
However, each coin has two sides, the disadvantages of this trend are even more significant than we can imagine. To commence with, imported food is not always healthy, some of them can be perished and modified to make them more efficient. Preservatives and harmful chemicals often tend to be added to fruits and vegetables to expand their shelf life during a long shipping period. Another conspicuous downside would be related to environment as a higher rate of exhaust fumes. Almost food will be transported by plane and this enhances toxic emissions. Four times the amount of CO2, which is one of the culprits of air pollution, will be released into the air which poses a detrimental effect on the atmosphere directly. As a result, Global Warming which is current happening to us, is inevitable and will exert influence on the future of our planet. On top of that, the economy has not escaped the consequence of this trend either. Competing with the large international market seems to be impossible for local farmers in a long term. More and more people are running out of business because of the lost income. If they stop producing food all together, the country needs to confront with a wide range of higher unemployment rate and has no choice except depend on offshore food.
In conclusion, I believe that importing food brings more negative effects than positive ones. Nevertheless, other viable measures should be taken into consideration by government to alleviate the aforementioned egregious consequences instead of halting the transaction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...development so that they have to import this fruit from India where many kinds of ma...
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Line 2, column 464, Rule ID: MANY_KINDS_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'mangoes', 'mangos'?
Suggestion: mangoes; mangos
...is fruit from India where many kinds of mango are available. The similarity could be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2136.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14698795181 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88503881718 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 176.041082164 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614457831325 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7385041334 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0909090909 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8636363636 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202473402682 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507647648373 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541005492732 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109520078904 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360250369347 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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