People sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals?
Nowadays, more and more individuals have shorter sleep duration compared to the past. There are a number of reasons for this trend, which is having a significant impact on both individuals and on the community as a whole.
There are two important reasons why more people nowadays are spending less time sleeping. Firstly, rather than getting a good night’s rest, many individuals consider that building their own successful careers is top-priority. If they had to split their time between working and sleeping when they were in the early stages of their careers, their performance at work and promotion prospects could be negatively affected. Therefore, they take almost a day to plunge headlong into work regardless of day and night. Secondly, these days there are numerous kinds of entertainment that are much more appealing to them than sleeping such as overnight parties with friends, chatting with strange people through the night,... or simply surfing newsfeed on social media.
However, this tendency could have negative consequences in terms of both individual life and society. Sleep deprivation causes a wide range of health problems. First and foremost, people who have poor sleep habits would be impaired brain function which leads to gradually decreasing concentration and productivity. If this situation lasts long, the distortion of sleep will occur followed by a series of chronic health conditions. Besides, individuals who sleep less than 8 hours a night have a greater risk of heart disease. Consequently, this could negatively affect the quality of the future workforce.
In conclusion, there are a number of reasons why more and more people sleep less at night. As a result, there could be negative influences on individuals and the society at large.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31560283688 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82520870649 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595744680851 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2618751761 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6875 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230895279318 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742234817717 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403935017014 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144685241561 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0104948573681 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.