People like to slide down and climb the mountain. What do you think about how they endangered their life? Is it a good trend?
Nowadays many people do extreme activities and most of them do it in mountains. I think it is a good idea to slide down and climb the mountain.
First of all, it is believed that this kind of extreme activities are very interesting and breathtaking. They do it due to desire to try new activity. In this time people experiencing existing emotions. Secondly it is very good experience for their further life. They can tell many differ stories connected with that to their friends and children. The more they put them at risk, the more they live life. They will learn to appreciate every minute of their existence, because there is only one life.
On another hand, it is dangerous for their life. People, who slide down the mountain may get many injuries and even to become disabled person. Moreover, if something goes wrong, for instance, a rope breaks, they may die.
In conclusion, I would say that it is a good trend, because it can be very funny and interesting, when people do it with their friends. After that, the have a lot of experience and new emotions, memories. However, at the same time extreme activities are very dangerous for their health and life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73658536585 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5773645168 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 506.74238477 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6695772858 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.7333333333 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329138592605 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107192070526 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888389833053 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206746537744 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752620869575 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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