People today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? What are the solution?
One of the biggest problems facing world today is feeling unsafe of people. This essay will examine the problem of feeling insecure of people at home or going out and suggest some solutions for it.
There are many problems connected with people not feeling safe everywhere. One problem is that it is quite easy to be in danger of accident when going out or even at home. For example, there are several accidents at home that people rarely care about such as problem of electricity, falling from the high floor,.. Meanwhile, what makes people worry when driving out or just walking is car accident. The proportion of car accident is increasing highly every year. Another issue is that social evils and terrorism occur everywhere. They affect to people negatively, specially to children and make everyone scared about it. For instance, one of the most dangerous evils is holding children to ransom.
There are many ways to tackle the problem of being dangerous at home or going out. One solution is that we need to advance our awareness of protecting ourselves. We also have to be significantly careful and observe the law. Another possibility is that government ought to decrease social evil and accident by tightening security and traffic, and strict punishment for any negative action affecting to people.
In conclusion, tightening security by government is the best solution to the unsafe problem of people because government play an important role of life and safety of resident. If we work together, we can overcome this serious threat.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05859375 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63907302303 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5703125 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2299273312 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9375 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259457186097 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776250450337 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757281923523 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144807649119 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848938158886 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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