People who have committed a crime cannot be allocated to groups just with high ages. In some countries, a high proportion of criminal acts are committed by teenagers. This essay is going to talk about the significant reasons for this issue.
First of all, the most important relationships among people, specially when they are a child or a teenager is their connection with parents. If they have a deep relation with their parents, they will tell them their problems even if they have done a bad thing nonetheless they would like to express their feelings so parents could be able to help them and also show their support therefore children would be able to overcome their difficulties. For example, if they do not have that kind of relationship with parents, they would be frustrated and even obsessive so as a result they may befriend with others whom their relatives have not known. Furthermore, that could raise the chance of making friends with others who could have bad personalities and they may learn from them to copy their friend`s behavior or even to commit a crime to be like them.
In addition, although technology and social media have been our helper and an inseparable principle of human`s lives, they have had bad effects on individuals specially teenagers because they are in a delicate ages where all things around them could have effects on their emotions and thoughts. Those things including TV have been showing extreme acts of violence and cruelty which have gone viral on the internet that have been able to encourage children to try the illegal acts and even to commit a crime even though they might have known, they will be doing a bad thing. Consequently, crimes which have committed by teenagers have risen because of those reasons.
In conclusion, many crimes have been committed by youngsters that could have several reasons such as bad connection with their parents and also internet and social media which may have been bad influences for them to gain bad attitudes and even have stimulated them to commit a crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, nonetheless, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93811074919 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60434401972 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495114006515 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.0994897081 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 189.5 106.682146367 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.375 20.7667163134 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 20.125 7.06120827912 285% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164999482896 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101566984386 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045749387826 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138055486359 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263391688221 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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