The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years.
Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.
In the last ten years, the record number of overweight children has increased nearly 20%. This essay will examine the causes and the consequences as well as how to solve it.
One of the reasons that has been making young people obese is diet. It is easy to see the fast-food industry is getting more and more popular these days. For instance, fast-food restaurants have now started to widen/expand their market not only in western countries but also in south-east Asian countries. Additionally, the main targets of the fast food advertisement are usually children. Hence, it has become one of the foods that children crave for. Other than that, convenience food can easily make people overweight because it contains several unhealthy ingredients such as salt and fat. Secondly, the phenomenon of overweight in children is also a result of lacking physical activity in their daily life. Nowadays, children do not spend enough time on exercising, instead, they choose to hang around with their friends at some fast-food restaurant or spend time using technology/ their smart devices.
There are many problems that may happen to overweight children.Firstly, they can easily suffer from chronic diseases like high blood pressure or diabetes in their later life. These consequences will threaten young people in many ways. In some cases, they can even get mental health problems like stress, anxiety or insomnia from bullying at school or even at home for being overweight. These consequences can be followed by other consequences, as a result of mental health problems these children tend to have less productivity, and thus, low quality of life.
In conclusion, because of the advance of technology and the fast-food industry, factors like poor diet and physical inactivity have led to the increase of obesity in children. As a result/ consequence, the physiological and psychological problems might/can occur to these children.
- The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20 in the last ten years Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend 84
- The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20 in the last ten years Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend 84
- The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20 in the last ten years Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend 84
- The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20 in the last ten years Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend 84
- The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20 in the last ten years Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28896103896 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89240890314 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594155844156 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4964886255 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.8125 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139764409649 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052983563244 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696997268036 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116351272727 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948325380454 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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