Flora plays a significant role in our habitat. While some agree that trees should be planted in empty areas in cities or towns, others argue that households should be built instead. In my point of view, I would say that tree's existence is more indispensable than housing facilities.
To begin with, our health depends on the number of trees in the habitat. As can be seen, since the first living feature has appeared on Earth, plants always provide oxygen and other indispensable factors to preserve our life. For instance, without trees surrounding, nobody will be able to survive within a minute due to oxygen deficiency, recent studies have shown. Moreover, city scenery will become more attractive if more greens are being seen. Planting trees and flowers along with modern architecture makes the living habitat environmentally friendly and promotes visitors proportion. For example, people prefer going to a park in a city rather than visiting a modern manufactory.
In addition to the above advantages, recognizing plant's undeniable role and plant them around the habitat help protect the biodiversity. Anywhere witnessed a plant existence, there will be animals or insects finding to live around. Furthermore, nutritions that come from the tree's roots also stimulate other small plants like mushrooms or parasitic flowers growth. For instance, ants and bees like to use tree branches or roots to make a nest and to hang their hives.
In conclusion, planting more trees should be the priority with human living due to health protection, making spectacular scenery, and preserve biodiversity. For those reasons, plants should be existed in vacant areas rather than cutting-edge buildings
- Many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention at school What are the reasons What could be done 84
- Young people who commit crimes should be treated in the same as as adults who commit crimes To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 78
- Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 56
- Today many countries import food from different parts of the world Is this a positive or negative development 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
Flora plays an significant role to our habitat. While ...
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Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'agrees'.
Suggestion: agrees
...cant role to our habitat. While someone agree that trees should be planted in emtpy a...
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Line 4, column 198, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'existed'?
Suggestion: existed
...ty. For those reasons, plants should be exist in vacant area rather than cutting-edge...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42205323194 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74518395175 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631178707224 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2343116176 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384239925947 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123020764787 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993384426882 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257499416323 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879290032926 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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