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Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think it should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?

In regard of these adverse effects plastic wastes have caused on the environment, there are those who hold the belief that plastic shopping bags should not be allowed in our daily lives. From my perspective, I totally advocate this solution in order to save the alarming status of global environment and existence of natural creatures from becoming destroyed. First and foremost, it is obvious that plastic bags is a considerable threat to the natural environment. As you know, plastic is a non-biodegradable substance, which means that it takes several thousand years just to decompose a simple plastic shopping bags. Therefore, when being deeply buried into the soil, the sustainable condition of these harmful bags will prevent flora's root from growing. As a result, it cannot be denied that both soil pollution and evenly erosion are certainly unavoidable.  Besides, plastic wastes are considered to be a potential criminal causing a huge death of varied animals. In clarification, it can be seen that fauna has supposed these plastic bags to be their food without having any awareness of their terrible injury. For instance, aquatic species have been cheated by jellyfish-like appearances of plastic bags and ingest them. As a consequence, this results in dreadful diseases to the marine life. Last but not least, plastic bags are harmful to human health. To be clarified, they contain a variety of contaminated substances. Thus, the more foods or other things we store in a plastic bag, the more risks we take to be suffered from serious health problem such as: kidney cancer, obedient and so on. In conclusion, it in undeniable that plastic bags have badly affected on not only the environmental aspect but also the global animal lives. Hence, I myself strongly agree with the statement that the government should prohibit the usage of plastic bags as soon as possible.<div> </div>

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, you know, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3320.0 1615.20841683 206% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 8.1173594132 5.12529762239 158% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 9.93017510019 2.80592935109 354% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518337408313 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 861.3 506.74238477 170% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.60771543086 131% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 207.208203673 49.4020404114 419% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 301.818181818 106.682146367 283% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 37.1818181818 20.7667163134 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0814777521397 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622851054657 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307404127575 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814777521397 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.4 13.0946893788 270% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -8.38 50.2224549098 -17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 30.41 12.4159519038 245% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 36.0 9.78957915832 368% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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