At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large no. of young adults compared with the no. of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Now a days, increasing the number of old age people is becoming hot issue of some countries, while in many countries population is increasing rapidly and this increment contain the huge portion of youth as comparison to other age people. This essay will examine the both advantages and disadvantages of growing adult in increasing population before reaching in conclusion.
To begin with, we cannot deny the merits of having large number of youth in country rather than old age people. Young people are always creative and curious, they can be very useful for growing innovative world and can bring out new innovation too. For instance, if there are large number of adults in country, then industrial sector are tend to grow rapidly because they can find talented youth in own country. Furthermore, this help to increase productivity and must not bring skill employee from another country by paying high. As being a fit and healthier group rather than old age, they are more productive and energetic to bring out any new changes in country. As a result, various social and political changes are made only with the help of young people energy and as a rational citizen they can accept global changes easily. However, youth are also the main source of growing economic condition of some country. As another advantage, if country has huge number of healthier citizen than the expenses on healthcare, pension and other facilities can reduce, which can be invest on different development project of country.
On other hand, the main downside of having youth in huge number is unemployment rate. For example, if the government cannot deal with situation and fail to create enough employment for them, then the skillful youth can turn to unemployed group in country. This can lead to increase in criminal and illegal activities in country.
In conclusion, having large number of young people in country can be merits but the government must make effective rules to deal with youth by giving more facilities and education to make them creative and skillful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04411764706 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60364895661 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508823529412 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8375064967 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.5 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147582908292 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566171245458 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415007301468 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10147999993 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410194989454 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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